Rod E. Kok
October 3, 2014
Murmured voices break the silence
To my right
a cute couple clink
their wine glasses together
in a celebratory toast.
Off to the left,
an older gentleman
engages an old-ish lady
in whispered conversation.
I’m guessing he’s whispering
sweet nothings to his bride.
The well dressed young man
standing at the bar
survey’s the crowd,
looking restless.
He seems to be waiting
for…
Ah, that beautiful girl
that just walked in.
Her eyes light up,
his face breaks into
a big smile.
I love the ambience
of this old place.
Red carpets,
dim lights,
candles flickering in
every direction.
My time here is
almost done.
I only need
some sugar
for this last
cup of coffee.
Loved each scene, great write!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteThese scenes worked so well together.
ReplyDeleteI was really trying to create an ambience. I think it worked! Thank you!!
DeleteLoved the story. A pleasure to read!
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting!!
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