Today, I went with a cinquain. You can read about this particular form here. In short, it is a 22 syllable poem, non-rhyming, with the syllables per line being 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. I don't know if I strictly adhered to all the rules, but there are different schools of thought about the cinquain, different ways to do it. I did stay with the syllable count, as that seems to be the most important. I hope you enjoy this poem. It is very much in line with what I posted on day 26. The prompt naturally led me here.
Rod E. Kok
October 27, 2014
asleep
immersed in dreams
subconscious thoughts of you
warm and safe in our bed, alone
come home
I hope she comes home soon! You're breaking my heart. :-)
ReplyDeleteLove the cinquain.
Lovely! I remember learning how to write cinquains eons ago...hadn't thought about them for a long while...might have to try my hand at one or two. Thanks for the beautiful reminder of the art.
ReplyDeleteNice! so much said in so few words :-)
ReplyDeleteBravo for trying something different. You certainly wrote an effective cinquain! I'm a great fan of brevity in poetry - it forces us to condense, with just enough words to get across what we want to say.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful. :)
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