Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Heartbeat

Written for the patrons at the pub.

Within a single heartbeat
echoes of love
shape the very manner
in which we work
together.
 
Inwardly our minds turn
we listen to the cadence
of every romantic
thought that fills
our mind.
 
Our fervour reaches deep
into that place,
that oh so special place,
where body, soul and mind
become one.
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10 comments:

  1. camille.arends@gmail.comFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:20 PM

    Nicely done!

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  2. c.rosescribe@gmail.comFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:21 PM

    lovely expression in this, a dance of emotion and passion. ~ Rose

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  3. Heaven (@asweetlust)February 28, 2013 at 2:27 PM

    I love the romantic cadence ~ Thanks for sharing with D’verse and nice to meet you ~

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  4. cloudfactor5February 28, 2013 at 2:28 PM

    your poetic vibe has a nice rhythm here, Well Done !!

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  5. Heaven (@asweetlust)February 28, 2013 at 2:30 PM

    I love the romantic cadence ~ Thanks for sharing with D’verse and nice to meet you ~

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  6. MaryFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:31 PM

    Beautifully expressed!

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  7. TonyFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:34 PM

    Terrific writing where you have reached that place …

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  8. ClaudiaFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:34 PM

    i too like the cadence of heartbeat…that point of magic when things feel just right..

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  9. Brian MillerFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:35 PM

    nice…now that is a bit of magic when you can hit that spot you know…smiles…nice energy in this piece…

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  10. Victoria C. SlottoFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:36 PM

    Thank you for sharing this at the pub! I especially like the second stanza…focusing on the cadence of the heartbeat.

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