Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Heartbeat

Written for the patrons at the pub.

Within a single heartbeat
echoes of love
shape the very manner
in which we work
together.
 
Inwardly our minds turn
we listen to the cadence
of every romantic
thought that fills
our mind.
 
Our fervour reaches deep
into that place,
that oh so special place,
where body, soul and mind
become one.

10 comments:

  1. camille.arends@gmail.comFebruary 28, 2013 at 2:20 PM

    Nicely done!

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  2. lovely expression in this, a dance of emotion and passion. ~ Rose

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  3. I love the romantic cadence ~ Thanks for sharing with D’verse and nice to meet you ~

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  4. your poetic vibe has a nice rhythm here, Well Done !!

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  5. I love the romantic cadence ~ Thanks for sharing with D’verse and nice to meet you ~

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  6. Terrific writing where you have reached that place …

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  7. i too like the cadence of heartbeat…that point of magic when things feel just right..

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  8. nice…now that is a bit of magic when you can hit that spot you know…smiles…nice energy in this piece…

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  9. Thank you for sharing this at the pub! I especially like the second stanza…focusing on the cadence of the heartbeat.

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